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I'm abandoning this render now. It's not quite what I wanted, but I can't put into words what I DO want. Any critiques comments would be welcome 
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2500x3929px 4.91 MB
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Hello, I'm here to play comment tag! 
My tagword was "woman," which was easy enough to find in your gallery.
I really like the mood in this piece, the mist and background make it seem quite etheral and suitable for a goddess. I also love her face, something slightly different from the usual oval shape.
One thing I noticed is that the direction of the wind isn't clear - her clothes are blown to the left, the jewellery thingy dangling from her tiara to the right, and her hair from either the front or the back.
The pose of her left hand seems rather stiff, and the legs seem knock-kneed (if that's the right word - you know, the knees are too close to each other.) In general, the top and bottom half of the pose don't seem to fit together - the top is that of a confident woman, whereas the lower seems that of a much more insecure character. Maybe you could try putting the weight on one foot or place her feet farther apart (similar to this or this) and straighten the back, at least a bit.
The lighting and shading looks really good, the softness of the light reflects the mistiness of the environment.
A minor thing, the jewellery doesn't fit together too well. The tiara seems very frail and light whereas the necklace looks pretty big and massive.
Anyway, I've looked trough your gallery a little and you have some really nice stuff! Keep it up!
(I think I'm the last in line for the game, so no tag word for you
)
My tagword was "woman," which was easy enough to find in your gallery.I really like the mood in this piece, the mist and background make it seem quite etheral and suitable for a goddess. I also love her face, something slightly different from the usual oval shape.
One thing I noticed is that the direction of the wind isn't clear - her clothes are blown to the left, the jewellery thingy dangling from her tiara to the right, and her hair from either the front or the back.
The pose of her left hand seems rather stiff, and the legs seem knock-kneed (if that's the right word - you know, the knees are too close to each other.) In general, the top and bottom half of the pose don't seem to fit together - the top is that of a confident woman, whereas the lower seems that of a much more insecure character. Maybe you could try putting the weight on one foot or place her feet farther apart (similar to this or this) and straighten the back, at least a bit.
The lighting and shading looks really good, the softness of the light reflects the mistiness of the environment.
A minor thing, the jewellery doesn't fit together too well. The tiara seems very frail and light whereas the necklace looks pretty big and massive.
Anyway, I've looked trough your gallery a little and you have some really nice stuff! Keep it up!
(I think I'm the last in line for the game, so no tag word for you
)